finalised booklet for hand in

Got critique's from class members and tutors today about my booklet in class today. I plan on implementing the majority of their ideas tonight and printing it off for presentation and hand in tomorrow. Overall I feel my booklet conveys the ideas I was trying to express. In saying that I also think it could do with a lot more development just to make it more interesting. If I had more time on the project I would revisit my key imagery and work on making the whole booklet more fluid and inviting.